Why am I Toastmaster – Ramakoti Mandla 2/5 (1)

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  1. Body language :
    When you said ‘If you want anything in this world’, there is a good usage of hand gestures.

    Project 2 demands General purpose and specific purpose. From your speech, I got to know the general purpose of your speech as Why am I Toastmaster but I didn’t get the clarity on what is the specific purpose.

    Conclusion :
    Once you said let me conclude, you spoke for nearly 1 minute 20 seconds. Instead wind up your speech with some quote or reiterate few points from your speech or make the audience think with some open ended question, etc to conclude.

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    Explaining about the body language when you got table topics came so naturally.


    Too much unnecessary movement from left to right and vice-versa is distracting. Inappropriate long pauses at many places can be avoided. You tend to speak too fast whenever you raise your voice tone. At times, body language was too artificial.